Prayer, is drawing close to the God of Love
It is the fundamental essence, which he gave from above
He is our provider, he has the answer to all things
Psalms inspired by David, verses which he sings
Knowledge of God requires obeying his laws
Remember we're not perfect, we have many flaws
He knows every hair upon our head
And we are in his memory when we are dead
We are his creation, in his image were designed
He loves us all, his forgiveness without time
At this moment in time he must be sad
For this world that we live in, is abomnably bad
God does not rule this world today
Satan and his demons have been given leeway
Not for long, the Bible tells us so
For the great day of judgement that was told so long ago
Time is drawing close as this world has become unclean
Nobody caring, our planet is no longer green
Heavenly Father forgive us, for we do not no your worth
Help us to survive on this perishing earth.
Give us understanding, let us peruse your Word
We thank you in the name of Jesus Christ OUR LORD!
A contest entry
- What is Prayer to You by Samplette.
475 points, ended August 16, 2007, 23 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Lets Celebrate Our Christianity by Dark Whispers.
456 points, ended September 1, 2007, 24 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Prayer Request for Suzi better known as Speakingupforkids (currently vacant) by Over and Done.
600 points, ended February 19, 2008, 11 entries
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This is a wonderful prayer nansie, thank you!
Suzi
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a very heart felt and touching prayer that god has given you here and with the help of some of those who pray it will make a difference in someones life , withoug god in our lives we have not much of a chance of succeding in our goals and controls so lets all pray for one another and make a stand in the name of jesus christ
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Aye, God has not abandoned us.
Where the most good exists, Satan attempts to equal it with evil. 
Yes, we must surely be in the winding up scene here on Earth but our time and God's time are incomprehensible to us so in the meantime, we just try to be good. 
A fine poem, filled with deep meaning. 
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God is in control, let there be no doubt. This is a nice write. Thank you for entering the contest.
Sam
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Wonderful
Greetings,
I came to the poem by pressing the random button. I am glad I did. Prayer, is drawing close to the God of Love, for God is love. In the purest form, man has mostly perverted God into their own design. This poem (prayer) put the proper perspective on this.
Such beautiful words; passages, it does beg the question. Are these your words or are they God’s? We can debate this for eternity.
These are fine examples
“He is our provider, he has the answer to all things”
“Remember we're not perfect, we have many flaws”
“He knows every hair upon our head”(s) <- did you forget the “s”?
This is my favorite passage:
“And we are in his memory when we are dead
We are his creation, in his image were designed
He loves us all, his forgiveness without time”
However I do tend to see the good not the bad in mankind the rest of the poem gets very dogmatic and is very chastising.
Yet, as a whole it is a wonderful work and you should be very proud.
Take Care,
Dark Energy, AKA Jonathan -
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Thank you
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Thank you Jonathan
You make my heart glad, thank you for your lovely words of praise on my poem, my poems are inspired by Gods Word, James 4 Verse 8 says Draw Close to God and he will draw close to you. I believe in the good of mankind, we are not all bad, but today it seems some want power over the earth, and from this man is confused into doing dangerous and abominable things to mankind
Once again thank you
Love Light and Peace
Nansie
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This is so beautiful. I believe all this too.
He does give us hope. Enjoyed the read!!!
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