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My Kryptonite

You are my Kryptonite,
For your simple smile makes me so weak,
That no matter how hard I try, I just cannot speak,
You often under-estimate your own abilities,
Without even seeing any of the possibilities,
That everything you do, good or bad, has a purpose,
For everything you do, takes away my pain,
You are the reason that I play this game,
The tough, long, game of life,
Where someday I will make you my wife,
Doesnt matter WHO thinks we don't belong together,
Just because they don't know what we are to eachother,
or rather who we aren't without eachother,
I dont know how and can't explain why,
Your heart beat is all I rely
on, Just to survive,
For it's the reason I'm alive,
When you're around, everyone just disappears,
Along with every single one of my fears,
And whenever I'm with you, I dont sleep that night,
Because baby, You are my Kryptonite

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  • quirkykitty
    July 31, 2007

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    I liked this one, of course...
    Though you fudged the rhyming with each other/each other....

    This was my favorite, I think vvv
    You often under-estimate your own abilities/
    Without even seeing any of the possibilities


  • tawk gold member
    July 30, 2007

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    Wonderful poem of love for another. Wonderful imagery and emotion good luck and thanks for entering