softly,
sailing towards
his mind,
leaving
whispers-
trailing
into nothingness
A contest entry
- Quickie! 10/10/10 by FallingTwilight.
450 points, ended July 30, 2007, 6 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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wow love it each word hits
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the imagery was wonderful and for a short write it was sweet and wonderful. well done on a wonderful write
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I like the imagery and emotion.
Best of luck!
FallenPoeticAngel
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A wonderful title for this short piece. Good luck in this contest. Peace, Liz
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nice- it reminds me of a blue whale.. good luck
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