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Aphrodite

In a dream from many months ago I met Aphrodite.

An angel or being said come travel along,

So I followed it through on the astral plane,
uptime I saw tunnels aglow, no restrictions or even a wall.

Spirit masses, 

Far off singing,

Cosmic colors,

Constant shining.


The guide relieved my fright by walking hand in hand.


Afar she stands, the lovely Goddess Aphrodite.

A green silk sari wrapped around her body down to golden sandals.

We make acquaintance looking up and nodding.

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This was a real dream, or maybe I was astral projecting

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  • penman gold member
    March 24
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    Excellent

    A wonderful write, short by very mystical. Thank you for sharing.


  • Room without doors gold member
    August 12, 2007

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    Outstanding.

    I liked the sense of a vision of Aphrodite in a dream as if you are on the astral planes with a spirit guide. The imagery is creative and I liked the atmoshere of the poem a little bit like a meditation.A thoughtful poem.


  • x Star Dust x
    August 4, 2007

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    This was an awesome write! I'm a girl, and I'd love to meet her. OOOH, I'm straight too... but it would be great to have!