i've gone crazy
sitting on my bed
people always dyin
people in my head
i've gone crazy
and that's the truth
i've been an old man
in the midst of youth
i shine my teeth
as i brush my boots
i fold up my bedroom
and lock my parachutes
bang bangin crazy
it's that kind of fun
i think i'll eat some C4
i think i'll eat your gun
i've gone crazy
sitting on my head
people always dyin
taken by the head
my computer yells at me
when i yell at him
when we get in an argument
it's something i can't win
i'm thinkin that i'm dyin
i'm thinkin that i'm gone
don't thinkin i'm lyin
don't thinkin i'm done
i'm going crazy and
the water's on my brain
the crazy's going stable
and it's driving me insane
Author notes
bang bangin? i ad libbed them both
In a list
have i?
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hmm..
interesting question. hehe. i'll eat your gun.
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"i think i'll eat your gun"
Don't just stand there, SHOOT! BUT YOU FUCKiNG ATE MY GUN!
(metal.gear.awesome.) http://www.deviantart.com/view/29463025/
my favorite line is probably...
the crazy's going stable
and it's driving me insane
ps. don't go crazy. I'm here k? &i need you too much. -
The piece is really cool way to go back to one essential euphemism "post dramatic stress disorder", which is one of the lamest fucken euphemisms man has ever made, its almost as if the FDA renamed a simple concise phrase like shell shocked, to that to take away all emotion and reality of it. This was a good piece, I enjoyed it! I would suggest in the second to last stanza "don't thinkin I'm lyin" that you made the first and second term agree. "Don't be thinkin"
"Don't think". Besides that I appreciate colloquialism and understand this is a piece meant to mimick how we speak.
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