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Sweet Awakening

Awakened by whispers and heartbeats,
slowly I stretch and sigh.
Your lips on my breasts, I enfold you,
as strong hands gently massage...
my senses woke with delight.

How you rise with the sun in the morning,
love bursting with sunshine.
A stream of pleasure meets the dawn,
feeling takes hold, as this new day...
brings forth an endless flow.

As my hands guide you with anticipation,
you command with such firmness.
Now your strength so irresistable, you enter,
moans replace soft whispers...
mid movements frenzied, deliberate.

Your release fulfills my every desire,
now cradled in your arms.
My longing for more will last till day's end,
as the red sun sets...
we'll enjoy again, the heat of the day!



 

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  • Little Blue Bird
    August 13, 2007
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    wonderful

    I say exactly what country cousin said and Delightful!


  • CountryCousin
    August 3, 2007

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    Ah romance.

    You have a wonderful way or wording a romantic piece. Yes it is hot out there but some poetry is like a breath of fresh air.


  • delightfulmess gold member
    July 30, 2007

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    Sigh... This is a wonderful Goodmorning
    Great Job with this one.
    that last stanza WOW

    delila


    • Sandygram silver member
      July 31, 2007
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      Nice Comment

      Thank you for the nice comment on my poem. Take care, Sandy
  • Bob Fox
    July 30, 2007

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    wow

    How very clasy, sexual and erotic. Made me drift off to those wonderful past mornings...Perhaps never again to know.. Great write my poet friend


    • Sandygram silver member
      July 31, 2007
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      Wonderful Comment

      Thaznk you Bob, so glad you enjoyed. I don't wreite sensualk too much. When I do its my mind wandering and missing someone dear. You take care. You take care, Sandy
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