I wonder if you’d pause to take
My fragrance, my aplomb
Or the way that my brow furrows
When consternation alights
I wonder if you’d remark on
My penchant for dark humor
Or the way my feet ache
When long lines try my patience
Regardless, with your petal array
I think I’ll drink you in
Author notes
Written September 3rd, 2003
A contest entry
- Blossoms by Ms. Trick.
300 points, ended September 7, 2003, 22 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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hmmm... I like this new system where you just hit the "return the favor" button on notes and wind up at old poems that won silver and nary a comment. How intriguing. I like dark humor and as for petal arrays, well... sounds sexy!
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Would that it were so easy...
...to sound sexy. Thanks for the read. I'll be sure to provide more dark humor in the future.
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