I was totally
mesmerized...
By those eyes
that seems to be dreaming
By those lips
that curved to an adorable smile...
Just perfect
By that face
That's totally
BEAUTIFUL
But then it stops me...
stops me from those captivating illusions...
His hands...
are already intertwined...
with somebody...
what's worse...
it's done lovingly...
Author notes
it's just me
i need to write this...
or else I'll just find myself sulking in my room again...
and I really hate that.
A contest entry
- Pre-write challenge! by Lady Michaella.
485 points, ended February 20, 66 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
unloved but loving still... please tell me what you think!!!
Comments
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oo... this is beautiful!!! very sad though.. and exactly what i wanted to read.. really good job. and feel better!
Thanks for entering my contest,
and best of luck!
Your judge,
-Lemon Bee- -
Amazing!!!
it's done lovingly
how you managed suspense at the ending. I've been also into this...I tend to be infatuated with these kind of guys...and the gf is Ms Campus
Astig! galing ng Pinoy!
Anna Lee
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wow...its like..she's in love w/ him..catching glances of him at the corner..and only to find him touching someone else...heart breaking..wonderful piece..
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I have been in this situation quite a few times that it seems a bit tedious when it does happen. *sigh* What if all of those "better" girls never existed? I bet guys would go for us then
Try harder to output yoru feelings and be open with someone you like, you might find it works
It does sometimes..
Just be honest with yourself and do nothing that will deliberately put you in a bad position. Girls should have their limits and guys shouldn't be allowed to have power over us without knowing it. They'd get big-headed if they did
Good luck,
Chin up,
Swim.x
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