As we walk together
Take my hand in your hand
Hold it tight and I shall do the same
For I’ll walk by your side
With every step you’d take
I’ll hold your hand tight
Through the rough nights
Hold you in my arms
So you can peacefully rest
Until you are ready for another stride
Take my hand and I’ll walk with you
Through the ups and downs
Every day life will throw your way
Pick up the broken pieces
Before you take another step
Hold my hand and I’ll walk as your shadow
Until the night falls upon
And I’ll then be your soul inside
But never leave your side
As far as your eyes can see
As far as your heart can reach
As far as you can perceive
Where the earth meets open skies
I will walk with you
By your side
Walking through the desert
Taking dip into painful tears
Wetting in the rain of all the pain and hurt
Facing the ugliness in life
Watching heart breaking into pieces
Was now I know only a short leap
Towards the open pastures of happiness
Waiting for me with open arms
Arms of you my love..
So, take my hand and I’ll hold on to yours
Forever to hold and to cherish until death do us part
The words spoken are from my heart
This is a promise with God as witness
So, nothing for sure can rip us apart
Take my hand and I’ll hold yours
I’m yours and you are mine
Through the long days of summer
Through the blizzards of winter
Capturing the beauty of spring
And enjoying the autumn breeze
Every season shall be a new beginning
Bringing break of new morning
With you by my side
I know this is not just a dream
But my dream that is merged into reality
Now I understand God’s plan
The reason I questioned of my existence in this world
I know now is for you and only you
I love you for now and through eternity…
Author notes
Just my way of telling someone, one day, I love him
In a list
A contest entry
- Calling ALL Hopeless Romantics Come on in and show me what you've got! by PureRomance.
525 points, ended November 23, 2007, 25 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Excellent piece you can really feel the emotions in it The background also is really cute. First time I seen the mm guys here so it's unique to me.
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Thanks PoovyLou
Thanks hun for reading this poem of mine... I appreciate your time and support... Thanks again for such a sweet comment and happy applauds
... take care Minoo
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This is so beautiful and heartfelt.
I love the emotions and sincerity in this piece.
I am sure that this person that you tell this to
will be happy and fall more in love with you.
Well done and all the best to you in this
contest! Thanks a lot for sharing it here!
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Thanks Jeremy
Thanks Jeremy for stopping by to read this poem. I appreciate your support and such a beautiful comment... now I just need to go and find the one I need to read this to lol ... fat chance... I'm glad you liked it and again thanks for your time... take care Minoo
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Your heart over flows with the love you have for this man. Keep holding hands even when you grow old, it keeps love alive.
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Thanks Angelwings47
Thanks hun for stopping by and reading this poem... I wish that too - to hold his hand and grow wiser , not old ever, now only if I could find that perfect prince charming lol ... thanks anyways for your good wishes & supporting comment... I appreciate smiling applauds and your time... take care Minoo
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how beautiful is this poem it amazing
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Thanks Kissing Darkness
Thanks hun for taking time to read this poem of mine. I appreciate your support and smiling applauds... I'm glad you enjoyed reading this poem... take care Minoo
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This is truly an amazing poem. God bless you my friend for sharing this. Keep up the excellent work.
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Thanks Joel
Thanks Joel for taking time to read this poem. I appreciate your supporting applauds and wonderful comment... take care Minoo
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This is a very beautiful poem. You did a marvelous job with penning this together. I love it. Please, if it's not too much try and add me to your favs so that I may be able to read more from you as my contest progresses. God bless you my fellow poet friend in everything that you do and write, and good luck to you and your poem in my contest.
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very very great! You definately have some talent. Wonderful write!
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Thanks Angel of Heaven99
Thanks hun for stopping by... I'm glad you enjoyed reading this poem. Appreciate your supporting applauds.. take care Minoo
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OH MY GOODNESS!!!! this is the most lovely and most amazing thing I have read on here all day!!! and I have suffered thru endless poems this night. this poem is so amazing, so beautiful. I just love it!!!
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Thanks Arianna
Thanks hun for stopping by and reading this poem... I appreciate your kind comment and yahooing applauds.. Thanks again for your time and I'm glad you enjoyed reading this poem... Take care Minoo
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Adorably fanastic! Sweet softness of these words flow easily through the poem. It was hearwarming and smile-enforcing. Great write!
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Thanks Marie
Thanks hun for taking time to read this poem... I appreciate your time and kind comment and support.. take care Minoo
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Touching
Fabulous! That is very touching... a sense of devotion not only to be there, but to be subjugated to the other's needs and moldable to a perfect fit. I liked it very much.
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SO SWEET AND LOVELY!!!!!
Ah to let your heart belong to someone, the feeling is so special.
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Thank You
Thanks again for stopping by and taking time to read my poem... I truly appreciate your constant support and thoughtful comments. Thanks again for your time and yahooing applauds.. take care Minoo
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*sigh* This is lovely. This is how I feel about Jason but that will never come to pass. Your words are lovely. i hope you don't have to wait long to tell your special someone how you feel. Don't be afraid.
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Thanks hun
Thanks hun for stopping by and reading my poem. I appreciate your support and thoughtful comment. Thanks again for your time... take care Minoo
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Mom this is soooooo beautiful! I love how u write, it just hypnotizes ur readers, &makes them understand &value each word ur saying. I hope that 1 day u will find the someone just 4 u, &I bet he is out there lost, confused, &unpatiently searching 4 u. I love this beautiful &heartfelt write. Take care mom
P.S. I love this section the most
Take my hand and I’ll hold yours
I’m yours and you are mine
Through the long days of summer
Through the blizzards of winter
Capturing the beauty of spring
And enjoying the autumn breeze
Every season shall be a new beginning
Bringing break of new morning
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Thank you My Angel
Thanks baby for taking time to read your mom's poetry... You are a darling to leave such a beautiful thoughtful comment and showing your support... I'm so lucky to have you as my daughter... thank you sweetheart again... love & take care Mom
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