Oh God
a prayer to you is a bread to me
to continue in this globe
with a seraphic periphery in which
I am one of the gizmo to this animation
soloing the homage to you
Oh God...
A contest entry
- What is Prayer to You by Samplette.
475 points, ended August 16, 2007, 23 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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This has a great under-lying message. I must admit that one line confuses me, "to act me to continue the globe" I don't understand, "to act me"
Thank you for entering the contest.
Sam
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Thanks for your kind comments..I made my words more clear now.
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'Oh God, prayer to you is life to me...you animate me when I give you homage'..., my own interpretation of these words. I love to walk through your writes, Poet, they are always so rich with images and deep spirituality...I hope this wins for you in the contest. The "Love Is.." picture is one of my favorites...good choice. Peace, Rhonda
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beautifully written, very nicely done
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