I’ve waited so long, to come to blossom
The thrill of your touch is O so awesome
You are my gardener and nothing is wrong
To come to blossom, I’ve waited so long
Your flesh upon mine, like the driving rain
This moment in time is what keeps me sane
Knowing your body is a masculine shrine
Like the driving rain, your flesh upon mine
I give all to you, as our love grows
You are the gardener and I am your rose
My opened blossom in floral debut
As our love grows, I give all to you
Feeling your hands caressing my petals
Soft on my flesh as my body settles
O the pleasure comes in quivering bands
Caressing my petals, feeling your hands
Your masculine need, I’m here to fulfill
Take me darling, with your manly skill
I am your rose, please give me your seed
I’m here to fulfill, your masculine need
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and much love~ Desire~*~
...wonderful rhyme and smoothe flow to this....Passionate. steamy as well...Best of Luck!
~Tia
Oh my, turning the fan on high speed after that one. This was so sensual and steamy that it's a good thing I don't wear my glasses when I read, elsewise they would be steamed to the max. LOL What a brilliant piece this was, soft and flowing it melted my heart with each line. I haven't tried the swap quatrain as of yet, though after reading yours the inspiration is most definitely there. I think I need to go take a cold shower now so I will leave you with a standing ovation to go with a rousing applause. Best wishes in the contest, it sounds golden to me. Love you my friend, Joyce 
