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Fires Of Hell

Flames rising higher and higher,
I see the fires of hell.
Let me escape my chains;
Please don't let me burn.
I hear the devil laughing,
Telling me I cannot escape.
I see the gates are closing,
Please don't lock me in.
All around me
I hear the wails of death.
Bound to the flames,
Don't let me join the dead.
I feel myself sweating,
Flames licking at my skin.
Am I already burning?
Save me from the flames.

Author notes

Again, this is a really really old poem. I'd appreciate feedback though!

<3BD9

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  • Lord Dracon
    August 16, 2007

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    I liked it, its very descriptive and imaginative, enjoyed reading, I love this kind of stuff! Thanks for sharing!