You’ve always
Been there for me
Good times and bad times
Congratulated me
Upon achieving something
Stood there listening
To all my problems
Lent me a shoulder to cry on
We’ve ran through the rain
Laughing together
Broken school rules together
Shared drinks together
Sat on each others lap
Made fun of teachers
Bugged other classmates
Even tried to annoy them
Those good memories
Will never be freed from my heart
Even though we’ve had
Misunderstandings and disagreements
Fought in our early years
When I cried
Because you wouldn’t talk
Or even look at me
We were able to patch back
In the end
I told you my secrets
You told me yours
Made me laugh till I dropped
Made me become wild
Break out of my shell
Go through my daily life
Without having to think
About my problems anymore
Bringing upon a smile on my face
Now I’ve gotten over them
Thanks to you
Those great advices you gave
But what worries me most
Is how I’ll survive in future
When you’re gone
When we don’t remain friends
Because you helped
Shape me to become
Who I am today
And even if we don’t
Remain together in future
All I want you to know
Is that you’ve helped me loads
And I appreciate them all
I sure am going to miss you
Your weird laughter
When you see me in the morning
My life’s going to be as boring
As it was before I met you
Thanks for all those times
You’ve spent with me
Thanks for being a great friend
Thanks for being there
THANKS!
Author notes
THANK U LOADS friend... you'll always remain there... you've got a special place in my heart!!!
A contest entry
- BFF - FRIENDS to the END! by x Star Dust x.
500 points, ended August 19, 2007, 30 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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EXCELLENT! Sometimes we assume our friends know what they mean to us. 
I liked the way you presenting this! nice write! Thanks for entering my contest.
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ah. very nice. gosh! If I could have come up with something as light-hearted as this. But nah! didn't work out. But your's is still really nice and I would dedicate this to anyone who has indeed meant a great deal to me. It is sad thought when ppl have to part but still atleast for that brief period in our lives, we got a miracle from above. That keeps us going. really.
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Awesome! hehe. Nice write here. Do you know- you are a real lucky person to have a friend anyways? lol whoever this is written to, I am sure she feels the same way too!
Goodbye is hard. But hey, people leave, people come, and you gotta survive don't you? It's hard but oh well, whoever said life was easy?
And oh for God's sake dear, I have wondered loads why you aren't getting anymore comments and that's when I realised you weren't giving comments either!! XD Come on, give some poetry comments, and trust me that way your poetry grows too! &hugz&
Your write was really nice. I kept smiling all the way through- powerful imagery too. I loved the breaking rules part. lol. Thank god we escaped. hehe.
Awesome job! Brilliant write! Keep writing!
Talk to ya tomorrow!
--charu---
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