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Mirror (Rictameter)

Mirror
Looking at you
Reflection of a girl
Weeping silently, tormenting
Punctured deeply by your cold, direct look.
I turned my back but still I see
My bitter fantasy
In your fixed eyes
Mirror.

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  • Aussie Gypsy gold member
    August 21, 2007

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    This is a great piece, sad but wonderful all the same, you have done well to capture such emotion in short form

    Thank you for taking the time to enter this contest, I wish you the best of luck

    Karen