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The Rhythm of Life

The steady beat
of a heart or rain
setting a stillness on my soul
that sets my life
to dancing.

Such a simple thing
to need.  I need the rain to
clear my soul
heartbeats
to set my mind
free.

I am addicted
to the calm of rhythm
in life
and silence...
I crave it

because it allows me
to fade
into the constancy
of a metranome.

I set the stage
for others
so that I can be the backbone
of the ultimate symphony.

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  • mozarts funeral gold member
    August 10, 2007
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    Good work I love the last line!! Addicted to life eh! nice.