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Salty Mystery...

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All Partners are called together
by their leader giving a rang
She used the AP Bells
and is now waiting for her gang

Something has to be solved
it’s keeping them busy for day’s
there’s a bandit named Salt
and he is luring in on all their heists

There’s a big reward
to earn in this mystery case
and it’s promised to the first
able to unmask this thief’s face

Together they hunt him down
Searching where he hides now for day’s
And if he’s caught
they will punish him in many way’s

Cause nobody messes around
with the Partners in Crime
together they stand as one
worth every dime

This warning should be taken seriously
before there are only some Salty remains
No fooling our gang you Salty crook
because you’re jailed for life with Balls and Chains

 

 

 

 





 

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A contest entry

I heard the Bells.....

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  • catz Moderators member
    August 7, 2007

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    Well, he sure can't say he wasn't warned. Let's zero in on him and stop this guy... he's cuttng in to our territory

    A fun read, good luck in the contest ;0
    Dee


  • Poetic Tasha Moderators member
    August 6, 2007
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    just wanted to add my clappies


  • queen Moderators member
    August 2, 2007

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    Salty dog is a real character maybe we will catch him or her one of these days Good luck in the contest

  • Eulb kcalB
    July 31, 2007
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    cute piece love ...love it!!!


  • Ethereal One gold member
    July 30, 2007

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    ah.....this is so cute

    I would be afraid if I were him! Salty remains? That is really scary! lolol
    You have written a very clear warning to this guy.
    Good luck in the contest!

    Ethereal One


  • JeannieD Hunter gold member
    July 30, 2007

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    Heehee!! First off, I love the picture!! You go get him girl! This is so good. Seems old Salty is gonna have his tail feathers peppered Good luck in the contest sweetie.

    Jeannie

  • Poetic Tasha Moderators member
    July 30, 2007

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    LOL OMG I loved this great entry, and creative to boot!!! could this be the answer to the mystery??? Thanks for entering and good luck to you


  • wattle silver member
    July 30, 2007

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    Ms Wolfy, Why are you picking on guys? I've always found girly guys to be more devious; they break hearts and laugh loudly while watching poor sweet guys squirm. I think Salty is a girl, yes, a girl for sure. ----- Still you write a nice poem for a girl. ----- Thank you. ----- Why are we trying to hound this poor Salt, I’m sure she is a sweet thing.

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