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Heat of the Moment

He moved with fierce intent
  She looked around the room
His mind was on one thing
  She found nothing interesting
He clapped his buddy and pointed
  She kept her eyes fore casted down

His buddy gave him a sly smile
  She just hoped he wouldn't see her
He muttered she's the one tonight
  She drank quickly on her vodka
He felt a pull toward her as he walked
  She chuckled quietly to herself

His thoughts became enchanted
  She smirked to herself as he came
He stopped at her table waiting to see
  She knew wanted to talk to her
He offered his hand in an invite to her
  She continued to ignore the stranger

He couldn't take his eyes off her, wanting
  She merely got up and walked away
He followed, needing to know more
  She got to the alley where it was dark
He spoke to her, pleading her to stop and talk
  She turned on him quickly and pushed him

He grinned as she pushed up against him
  She told him to leave her alone and go back
He nodded telling her not in a million years
  She changed her facial expression to bare fang
He gulped and sinked away from her, frightened
  She told him, oh well, it's too late to be leaving

He tried to run, but he seemed to be glued to the spot
  She held his eyes in a glowering stare, daring him
He tried to calm himself down but he could see that
  She was coming closer to his neck and about to bite
He begged her to have mercy for him, for he got hot
  She laughed and said not in this life time and plunged

He cried out in pain, wishing he would have left her alone
  She sucked him till he was dry and licked her lips
He fell at her feet, dead, with a terror look upon his face
  She kicked him aside and sashayed down the street
He should have known better than to mess with a dark woman
  She just shook her head and said all for the heat of the moment

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  • Welcome-To-Hell
    July 30, 2007

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    Wow thats quite a tale you've woven I can picture every detailed event in this dark littlw rite wonderfully done