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My May

Oh the dark clouds seem to swarm when your away.
The world seems to disposed to actually care.
I know that time stands still, when I can't call you.
And the world seems to quiver in fear, against my wrath.
But i know somewhere deep inside you need me.
And that feeling alone sends me hope.
I can't help but say that i will you into being.
And i know you agree that you want me.
But still i have this feeling you'll go away for good.
Leaving me behind and getting a new life.
But what if I said i want you with me?
Would you leave for good or be my wife?
I know deep down that would excite you.
Maybe make you feel so enlightened.
So take a moment to think.
While I wait for you.
that bus just won't leave without a goodbye.
I feel like a junkie without drugs when you go.
And the fact that your not here just seems to show.
I want you every moment, it's like I'm infected.
A desease is what you are and I'm addicted.
So call me what you will i can't help it.
I feel so complete lets not fight.
No more lonely days wondering if your thinking about me.
And no more endless nights that scream your name.
The breatheless haze seems to flow away.
I can finally see again.
Your the reason that this world makes sense.
I can't live without you!
My May, my bright flower.

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  • Julia93
    August 31, 2007

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    Hey this is good! For some reason I think it would make a great song... the words flow like lyrics. I like a lot of your lines, like: "No more lonely days wondering if your thinking about me.
    And no more endless nights that scream your name." Well yeah that's just one example, but really I think this is really nice to read. It's really sweet and I love the ending "My May, my bright flower". Good job and keep writing!
    Julia


  • requiempoet gold member
    August 10, 2007
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    Ha ha ha very sensitive I like this alot!! it's cute


  • Sunshine85-
    July 30, 2007

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    ohhh this was to sweet! its so pretty! and your a guy? wow.. im amazed. I loved your poem! good luck in the contest!