Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read Contests Groups Learn Forums Store Help
 

You Once Controlled Me

Missing image
Times have come and gone, my dear
So many controlled by you
Deceitful and cruel, you were
Playing on my heart

You made me feel
Made me believe
All the while
Having a plan

So many times
You caused such pain
Taking that which
Is not yours

But this time
You came early
This mistake
Will be your demise

You have lost this time
And my heart is no longer your own
To take and kill when you are ready
No longer needing me for your games

I can now look at your face
This picture that I hold
And tell you that I loathe you
And wish you nothing but heart ache

You have hurt the ones I love
But yet you do NOT understand
Exactly what it is you do
And in the end your final plan

But you will not complete it
No longer am I on your side
It no longer hurts me to say
I look forward to when you die

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

I only wish your blood
Could be on my hands
You have hurt me so much
You have no idea
And yet I doubt you care
I asked someone to promise
To watch over you
But that was before I knew
All that you did and want to still do
I wish I hadn’t asked that
But yet you both know
I don’t like people hurting
But you, I wish I could forget

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Your controlling ways
Will no longer work on me
I am not your puppet on a string

You will not take what I love most
Away from me ever again

This game you play with him
Ends with you…the loser

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

I know of all the games you’ve played
You, I’m sure don’t remember
But if one day you get a glimpse
Know that you have lost forever


~vampy~

Author notes

One day you may finally see what you have done in this lifetime and many, many before.

In a list

    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments

1 - 5 of 5

  • Kalima
    July 30, 2007
    Edit | Reply
    That was really good, I loved it! Stacey:


  • owlishhunter
    July 30, 2007

    Edit | Reply

    POWERFUL AND DEEP

    As is your pattern, you have written and put together a very powerful piece of pen art here! You have managed to put this piece together masterfully, while making it totally relatable to the reader...simply wonderful!

    I know of all the games you’ve played
    You, I’m sure don’t remember
    But if one day you get a glimpse
    Know that you have lost forever

    That in and of itself is quite profound on many levels, my dear. The heart is indeed a fragile piece that can be played upon by the skilled, but that realization is the key to freedom.
    Bravo on a wonderfully written piece, my love...Bravo!!


    • vampira1665 silver member
      July 30, 2007
      Edit | Reply
      Thank you sweety. I knew you would understand this piece. If you are wondering about the pic, that was one of his names. Thank you for your understanding and all your love.

      I love you,

      Your Angel


  • goddesskevauna
    July 30, 2007

    Edit | Reply

    Yikes!

    Oh my, sis! That is just incredible! Wow! Man, it gives me the chills knowing how much we are so alike! Yikes! I so get it! Oh and by the way, LOVE the background! That's cool!


  • innocence jaded.xx
    July 29, 2007

    Edit | Reply
    OHHHH WOW.
    I can relate to this 100% it's scary!

    "You made me feel
    Made me believe
    All the while
    Having a plan"

    Yupppp. PERFECT WORDS right there. No doubt about it!

    "Your controlling ways
    Will no longer work on me
    I am not your puppet on a string"

    That's rightt=] You tell him/her! Wow.
    This is just ahmazing. I've experienced every single line. If you read some of my poems, you'll know what I mean.
    GREATTT job on this. It definitely deserves 3 applauses!!

1 - 5 of 5