the taste of your blood to mine,
i am only running on time,
death takes part in life,
ill hold yours if you hold my knfe,
im the devils spirit,
i can give you life or i can take your heart,
it is if you are only smart,
i can turn your head,
or you can bleed with the dead,
i am only yours to see,
dont let me go if its not to be,
here take my hand let me hold it tight,
this life shouldnt be a fight,
biting into your warm veins is good enough,
who says i cant have it rough.
Is this good?
Comments
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oOo. I really like this poem. It's very om I don't know what the word is but I'll just say eery eerie? lol. But it's pretty cool, thanks for sharing it with us!
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very vampiric not to vile but good to satisfy anyones dark thoughts. very good. you should try makin each line separate like;
the taste of your blood to mine,
I am only running on time"
this could give it more effect. but beside that very good writing.
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