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For you, my Dear

God made you
He made me too

He must have know
we were made for one another

I care
You care

Some day I hope & pray
That you & I will get to know each other

We'll melt into each others arms
And talk crazy talk

But after each day,
We'll both know

That we can count on one another
and always be friends no matter what

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I hope I am what you are looking for. Even if not, hope we can be friends

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  • oneal
    November 8, 2007

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    this is a very cute poem to read. I love the beginning! You truly had me in your first couple of stanzas.

    "God made you
    He made me too

    He must have know
    we were made for one another

    I care
    You care

    Some day I hope & pray
    That you & I will get to know each other"

    Love does have a source and you have demonstated this and at the same time created such an interesting unity in this section of your poem.

    Many more people should read this poem.


  • Tabitha-Robin
    September 4, 2007

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    Wow! This is amazing write. I thank you for posting this one. I enjoyed it much. God bless you my friend in all that you do. Keep the faith.

    Tabitha


  • InMemoryofCharlieJr
    August 3, 2007
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    Ro!
    OMG how are you? I'm so glad you came on.
    Thanks, I'm glad you like it


  • lilrochick silver member
    August 3, 2007
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    Very cute mem. i'm sorry i havn't been on for a while. I've miss ya sis. NEway i like this.

  • InMemoryofCharlieJr
    July 30, 2007
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    Thank you! Well, since I posted now, you should be able to see my username but in case not, it's InMemoryofCharlieJr you can call me Mem


  • Broken Machine
    July 29, 2007
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    Awww. Good luck! I liked the poem!


  • NerdforChrist777
    July 29, 2007

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    oooohhhh, sounds awesome! dont know yet tho, i havnt got all the entries yet.

    P.S. whats your username for AP, (i cant look at your profile through the contest)

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