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Heaven seen.

 

 

The tranquillity of

One season,

With Warm bright meadows

Of floral breezes.

 

Here, laughter lingers

And love is the only food.

Where soul mates untie

And loved ones find

That special someone they lost…

 

Pain and disability are

No longer words

The lame walk and

Everyone is rich in happiness.

 

The ultimate thing,

Is meeting God our king

When upon your back

He’ll place your wings.

   

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  • poeticweaver gold member
    August 1, 2007

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    Precious,

    I want to go here,
    this earth/ world aint cutting it for me. lol
    What a beautiful place to grace us with,
    if just a glimps. Thank you!

    -Timothy


  • Jadon
    July 30, 2007

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    "Everyone is rich in happiness"!

    The poet closes their eyes and 'sees'.
    You are one of those who manages to convey a great deal with a few well chosen and placed words. Your first verse set a tone of serenity, restfulness or "tranquility" for all that follows. You engage all the senses and trigger the pleasant memories of Earth by appealing to the strongest with "floral breezes"
    A 'healing' from the uncertainities of this life. I had thought wings to be expressive of freedom to move, of flight and had not thought of them in a literal sense. Either way, I shall be appreciative of not having to walk the breadth of Heaven.
    A delightful and well composed write. Thank you so much. Jadon


    • Lady Ireland gold member
      July 30, 2007

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      Jadon,
      your comment was poetry in its self!
      i thank you so much for this and i really do
      appreciate your applause.
      Yes it was a tranquil poem as heaven is in my mind.
      i ment for it to sooth and leave one with a peacefulness.
      i am so happy you got this from my poem.
      Slán Dolores xx


  • Cannonsfire
    July 29, 2007

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    Such spirituality abounds in this, just beautiful thoughts upon the page, it made me smile, I do hope he has a set for me Love, C