So much blood
is covering the sea
So much that we can't stop
the horror
the death
the sorrow
It's horrible
and we're helpless
because we can't stop the horror
I wish we could
because the death
is just sad
Death
blood
sorrow
horrow
Are just a few
things happening
in the middle east
People are dying
and there's so much blood shed
why are we killing each other?
We're family
we're not supposed to fight
Aren't we just human beings?
Why all the blood?
So much blood
so much pain
so much death
so much hate
so much anger
so much suffering
so much sorrow
The sea shouldn't be red
Stop the blood flow
Enough blood has been shed
So stop
A contest entry
- Contest - 10 Entries Only - Middle east Violence! Reserve Your Spot! by Cupcrazy.
450 points, ended August 5, 2007, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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A very painful piece about the true realities of war. Emotional and compelling. Hugs, Bunny


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too obnvous
but don't really understand the limitting of this contest to the middle east. is a bad thing but world wide no? or rather wherever humans are


