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Blood

So much blood
is covering the sea

So much that we can't stop
the horror
the death
the sorrow

It's horrible
and we're helpless
because we can't stop the horror

I wish we could
because the death
is just sad

Death
blood
  sorrow
  horrow

Are just a few
things happening
    in the middle east

People are dying
and there's so much blood shed
  why are we killing each other?

We're family
we're not supposed to fight

Aren't we just human beings?
Why all the blood?

So much blood
so much pain
  so much death
  so much hate
    so much anger
    so much suffering
      so much sorrow

The sea shouldn't be red
Stop the blood flow
Enough blood has been shed
So stop

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  • Cupcrazy gold member
    August 5, 2007
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    A very painful piece about the true realities of war. Emotional and compelling. Hugs, Bunny


  • michichoeret
    July 30, 2007

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    too obnvous

    but don't really understand the limitting of this contest to the middle east. is a bad thing but world wide no? or rather wherever humans are