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Just Another Day In Maine

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The middle of a pristine lake

An island with a sandy beach

A lovely picnic lunch we’ll take

The middle of a pristine lake

With lobster rolls and rib-eye steak

There’s paradise within our reach

The middle of a pristine lake

An island with a sandy beach


We pack the boat and leave the dock

Captain, First-Mate, and Amera

At nearly half-past ten o’clock

We pack the boat and leave the dock

Then circumnavigate a rock

We capture it on camera

We pack the boat and leave the dock

Captain, First-Mate, and Amera

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First-Mate’s unsteady in the boat

Her head is hanging o’er the rail

We’re struggling to stay afloat

First-Mate’s unsteady in the boat

She sings a very sour note

We take on water, start to bail

First-Mate's unsteady in the boat

Her head is hanging o’er the rail


Poor Amera goes overboard

Into the water cold and deep

Over the rail the water poured

Poor Amera went overboard

And all supplies that we had stored

So, Captain takes a mighty leap

Poor Amera goes overboard

Into the water cold and deep


The rescue was a swift success

Our soggy picnic packed again

Amera smiles in dripping dress

The rescue was a swift success

First-Mate regains her steadiness

It’s just another day in Maine

The rescue was a swift success

Our soggy picnic packed again


We stoutly sang a sailing song

And happiness would rule the day

We reached the island ‘fore too long

We stoutly sang a sailing song

The loons and mallards sang along

Our clothes dried off upon the way

We stoutly sang a sailing song

And happiness would rule the day


The picnic tasted mighty fine

Steak, lobster rolls, raw oysters, too

Some Bartlett’s Coastal dry white wine

The Picnic tasted mighty fine

Poetry made our spirits shine

Desert a pie of berries blue

The picnic tasted mighty fine

Steak, lobster rolls, raw oysters, too


So, then the crew sets up the tent

And gathers wood to build a fire

The captain chose just where it went

So, then the crew sets up the tent

Twas where the evening would be spent

Some distant thunderclouds inspire

So, then the crew sets up the tent

And gathers wood to build a fire


The lightning bugs put on a show

Amidst poetic merriment

Above the campfires’ embers glow

The fireflies put on a show

Till everybody seemed to know

‘Twas time to go inside the tent

The lightning bugs put on a show

Amidst poetic merriment


The daylight’s gone, but not the fun

A pen, a notebook, massive smiles

We wrote about the setting sun

The daylight’s gone, but not the fun

We vowed to write ‘till this is done

To chronicle these many miles

The daylight’s gone, but not the fun

A pen, a notebook, massive smiles


The breeze came up and raindrops fell

Loud thunder echoed from above

We’re mesmerized by natures’ spell

The breeze came up and raindrops fell

We laughed and joked and all was well

As never had we felt such love

The breeze came up and raindrops fell

Loud thunder echoed from above


The night proceeded blissfully

The lantern doused, but love still burns

A sleeping bag zips playfully

The night proceeded blissfully

And sleep came so reluctantly

More rhymes will have to wait their turns

The night proceeded blissfully

The lantern doused, but love still burns


The morning is a different hue

A smile says all there is to say

The early sunlight streaking through

The morning is a different hue

Both sky and water brighter blue

Life has been perfect for a day

The morning is a different hue

A smile says all there is to say

 

Author notes

Amera asked me to write her dinner and a show.

Faith assisted. She insisted the First-Mate puke and Amera go overboard. Then she wanted the Captain to save the day. After that, she was bored.

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Comments

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  • PoeticLove
    July 7

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    AWESOME, AMAZING FUNNY WITTY FANTASTIC,

    MARVELOUS, SUPERB, NEED I SAY MORE, POOR AMERA OVERBOARD, FAITH PUKING FOOD GALORE, HAPPY TIMES WHILE ON THE SHORE, PERVY SLEEPING, DID HE SNORE? LOVED THIS. d. XXX


  • sunny day silver member
    November 18, 2007

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    Bravo!!! Bravo!!! Bravo!!!

    Allan, I'm sorry it took so long to get back here and read this. You sir are one amazing poet. This was a grand chain of triolets that you put together and kept it flowing like that Bartlett's Coastal wine. Each stanza followed accordingly and both rhythm and rhyme were superb. I hope you will share some of those lobster rolls and rib eye steaks. Maine lobsters are the bestest. I was taken on a lovely trip for this write courtesy of your golden pen which I say congratulations for the well deserved sparlker that is sitting there. Thank you for sharing the gift of your illustrious pen with all of us. Love and God bless you my friend, Joyce


  • Sonnetnoelle
    August 16, 2007
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    cool

    First time I've read one of these...very nice!
  • Crystal Chanda Lear
    August 15, 2007

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    Exceptional

    Congratulations on winning the gold trophy with this superb Triolet Chain. You surely deserved it and more. Your poem is fabulous.

    David Michaels


  • 2lullabyhaven
    August 2, 2007

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    I am not bored, lol hahaha, this is awesome. Wow, thanks for entering it into my contest. lol (as I am laughing....)deliciously funny.
  • Arzab
    July 29, 2007

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    Beautiful write. I liked the ending. Seemed to have a happy romantic feeling to it. Good luck in the contest.


  • Amera gold member
    July 29, 2007

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    I shake my head back and forth. This isn’t the romantic dinner and show I was expecting or I wouldn’t have worn an $800 gown. All and all I had a wonderful time and I wouldn’t change a thing. The triolet is the perfect form for you to use as you are an amazing story teller. Good thing I can swim and tell Faith she’s in big trouble for deciding to have me fall overboard.

    Love,
    Amera, Hearts;

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