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' Secrets of A Winner Trout' (((Shoosh, Now))

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Written September 3rd, 2003

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  • CaliOkie silver member
    April 28

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    LOL. Very well done. Many people do not realize that there is a whole culture that revolves around fishing here in America. This is great. Now I'm going to go watch "Bassmasters" over on the Outdoor Channel.

    Thanks.

    Garrison


  • CookieZeal Greeters member
    August 31, 2004
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    Yup. Needed some comic relief!! HEHEHE!! Thank you. Unraveled this little ditty from last year just to give us a boost.
  • MtnGirl98 silver member
    August 31, 2004
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    Very cute! And I agree that the misspellings add to it - at first I was taken aback by them because this is SO well written; then I realized it was probably done purposely, which makes this all-the-more-clever! Great job! Adorable, just adorable! Love the picture too... that's a great idea!

  • artis gold member
    August 31, 2004
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    there is no joy such as is bobbin in a clear lake on a sunny day with ones piers, setting the bait that will bring in the pleasure of a prized catch, to be measured and ahh'd over, and then either released to excite again, or eaten to fully enjoy the hunt...great stuff, that trout and this poem that you've trotted out...lol~~~Artis

  • Sunshine
    December 23, 2003
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    Very Creative, Well Written

    Wow...I love this!!!...HAHAHA... The misspellings and everything ad to the charm...This was so cute hun
    God Bless, Sunshine
    P.S. Thanks for your comments
  • Made2GlorifyHim
    October 6, 2003
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    wow! wonderful! I love this soooooooo much! i like the creativity and the idea of putting it on something as a graphic.

    I don't know how you do it! you made me picture perfectly an old country man sittin on a boat and tellin his grandson about his secrets... it's awesome imagery that comes with this and it's just perfect.

    I love the use of dialect (sp?) and it adds even more to the whole mood of the thing. And using words like squirm and fussin you really add to the whole casual appeal and tone/mood of the whole poem.

    I usually don't like coupled rhyming but it works perfectly with this!!!! well done, and keep it up!

    As always,
    Made to Glorify HIM,
    Amie

  • myrataal silver member
    September 10, 2003
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    LOL LOL LOL

    You, dearest Poetess, fascinates me so much, that I think I am goin' to beg or borrow (or ... nope, on second thought, NOT steal ...) money to get over there to meet you in person and ... dull the eyes! (Only joking - we would need no "licker" to enjoy such humor!)

    Thank you for the laugh, you precious, poetic Soul!

    Hugs.

    Myra

  • Sprite silver member
    September 6, 2003
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    Lol...this is really quite charming and quaint. I enjoyed reading it so much. Brought back memories of my Granny and how she talked, and of days spent sitting in a boat or on the shore with a pole hanging over the side while I dreamt about the big fish I might catch.

  • Roseleaf
    September 4, 2003
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    Nothing better then fresh cooked fish
    Enjoyed the read

    happy fishing


    ~~pauline~~


  • Sherry gold member
    September 3, 2003
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    Cookie your probably a good fish catcher hon...Hugs,Sherry
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