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Wake Up

Scared, lost, and hopeless,
Reaching for a hand to hold,
While Nightmare rages on.

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just random...

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  • Puppydog gold member
    November 10, 2007
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    SCARRY NIGHTMARES!!!

    You describe so well just how one feels during a scarry dream.


  • soulfultia gold member
    August 9, 2007

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    This was dark and sad to me...very well reaching emotionally...very good! Sounds like night terrors!

  • star wars fanatic
    August 1, 2007

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    Wow, completely terrifying! Interesting haiku with some great word choice. (My personal fav form of poetry, I think! ) Good work, poet, and keep writing!

    I love your user name, by the way!


  • Jessica Lyndsay
    July 31, 2007

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    Well I like this just radom poem!! I like how good writers can take a subject and with few lines descibe it!! YOu do it well!! Talnet!! Horray!!! LOL! Keep up the good work and feel free to check out my page anytime!! Jess

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