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If I can't take it back, I'll just undo it all

I'm not ready for this
Please take it all back
You're pushing too far
I'm pushing back

Your sweet lips on mine
Please don't let this end
I'm waiting for you
I'm too tired to bend

I'm taking it back
Just forget all the highs
Let's make believe
And leave us mesmerized

I'll just pretend
It didn't end in this way
Let's make believe
I didn't push you away

Bring back my life
It wasn't worth the fight
The end of the candle
Is the end of the light

We can close our eyes to the truth
And open up to the lies
Let the ghost of our memory
Make beleive how we are
Mesmerized

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  • Poetryistherapy
    September 14, 2007

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    I was immeadiately drawn to this poem, and as I read it aloud to myself, I found myself enjoying it more and more. You wrote this with a beautiful pain aspect.. and I love it. Good Work.