crystal clear like the memories
that life's infestations steal away
slowly eating away at me
and now it's too late to pray
darkness steals away the sky
envelouping my lost mind
the falling tears now run dry
my sanity is left behind
these dreams give me some time
to escape my gruesome fears
i tell you that i'm fine
because i'm scared that they hear
chorus:
close my eyes from the world
convinced that they are real
because who else could
tell me this is how i feel
help me escape my emotions
maybe i can escape the truth
because i know it's them calling
and soon they'll call for you
:chorus
you smile up at me
but they tell me you're long gone
i enjoy your company
but they tell me that it's wrong
but saying that you're not here
doesn't make it true
i know that you are near
even if they can't see you
my breath is coming shallow
and soon it will stop
but i'll savor it for now
and hope that it's enough
chorus:
close my eyes from the world
convinced that they are real
because who else could
tell me this is how i feel
help me escape my emotions
maybe i can escape the truth
because i know it's them calling
and soon they'll call for you
:chorus
the water's pouring down on me
dripping into my mind
killing off reality
until nothing's left behind
the footsteps are still echoing
and i know that they are yours
i can't keep from following
because you're too real to ignore
help me help my stupid self
i need some time to think
the damage is too light to tell
if my life is on it's brink
chorus( repeat one time):
close my eyes from the world
convinced that they are real
because who else could
tell me this is how i feel
help me escape my emotions
maybe i can escape the truth
because i know it's them calling
and soon they'll call for you
:chorus
darkness plauges this hollow ground
that hides away forever
reality that's not yet found
somehow binds us together
Author notes
Please tell me your thoughts!!
much luv~
kitty
I know this is dark so tell me, did I over do it??
Comments
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I like this a lot.Good one.And no u did not over do it.
~Tia~
GOD BLESS
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Great job
I really really like it!I'm not sane..and I write like this sometimes, so I don't know.
We all go a bit insane sometimes. ^_^'
~KORI~
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lol- thankyou!!
much luv~
kitty
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"envelouping"
^Enveloping!
Please capitalize the word "I."
I really liked the flow of this and think it would make a splendid song. It is very original.
And you are quite sane in my oppinion.
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sorry.. forgot this...
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i think the write is AWESOME!! i wish i could write lyrics... thay dont ever come out right. but this is really great! i especially like the chorus! keep writing!
Blessed Be
Bellezza -
hey I havent talked to you in a while!!! Lovely write though!!! I very much enjoyed it ~makes up tune in head~ so yeah I hope I can talk to you again sooooo...ttyl!!!!!
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lol- thanks!!
sorry, I haven't been on much lately!! I'll catch up with ya later- thankya for reading!! XD
much luv~
kitty
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This reminds me of my friend, who didn't have a good life. She's free now I guess..
I love it. It's beautiful, there's nothing called "To overdo" feelings can't be overdone. the chorus has such a nice rhythm, really beautifull^^
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Fantastic write! Wow...this is a really good rhythym with great words. I could put myself in so many situations here, with so many emotions! I think this would make a great song! Thank you for sharing.
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