You can't see me now,
only what I've done.
I'll make it through somehow,
but I refuse to run.
I have to face
letting love slip away.
You were my only one,
and I made you walk away.
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Maybe we could wait another day,
I don't think I can do this today.
I'm sorry for the life I made,
and letting you slowly drift away.
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So now here I am,
as you're planning your escape.
And my tears come to lie
by the smile on your face.
I hope you're better off
without my love in your way.
But for me this is the cost,
and its more than I can take...
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Maybe we could wait another day,
I don't think I can do this today.
I'm sorry for the life I made,
and letting you slowly drift away.
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Very Nice!
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I just absolutely loved the song ... you changed up some words ... which made it sound so much better ... Lovely honey ... Maybe some time ... you can work up some music to my lyrics ... take a look at them and let me know if we can put them together somehow ... what ya think huh huh tell me tell me lmao .... very well done babe ... much luv 2 ya during your time of need ... Sparkeh
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A friend of mine is trying to help me out with getting better recordings, right now I record everything with a digital camera
It's actually quite a process to get it all to work... I need to get a mic. Send me a link, I'll see what you got.
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You will make it through ... I have complete faith in you ... The lyrics you have penned ... are so lovely ... and I cannot wait to hear your beautiful song ... You are so amazing ... I have always loved to read your words ... Keep strong my love ... and build anew ... You will see in the long run ... that everything happens for a reason ... You are a strong individual ... and you will make it ... I know ... because I was once there myself ... I love you Bryan ... Always remember that ... My love and prayers are always with you darling.
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Sounds like the beginning of a moving and emotional recording.
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I really definitely liked this one! Incredible=]
"You can't see me now,
only what I've done.
I'll make it through somehow,
but I refuse to run."
I loved the "I refuse to run." It makes the reader [me] realize that you're strong, and you aren't gonna run from ANYTHING. There's a lot of power in those first lines.
"Maybe we could wait another day,
I don't think I can do this today.
I'm sorry for the life I made,
and letting you slowly drift away."
Oooh! Fabulous chorus. LOVE it. It speaks so much hurt and regret, but it's ahmazing.
And I saw in your author's notes that you're recording this? Ahhh I'd love to hear it! Because this would make an amazing song!
Thanks for entering and good luck in the contest! -
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I have a recording posted now.
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