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Vampire

The Vampire crouched down
Awaiting its very unique prey
He has laid out her new gown
When she sees her face turns ash grey

His smirk is almost as bad as a bite
His eyes almost like a mirror
His grip is oh so tight
His glistening teeth grow nearer

Her skin turning pale
Her screams go unheard
Her body becomes frail
Her seen world turns blurred

And her mortal life is over
But a new is just began
And now she has no owner
She can make her own plan

She awakens from the dream
And wishes and wishes no one
had heard her scream
when that night so begun

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  • ApatheticDeviant
    August 4, 2007
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    i loved reading this poem it flowed and had a nice use of words...good luck
    ~Wolf~