There are so many things I cannot speak
If I verbalize them I will become weak
So many things I don't dare utter aloud
So many things that to accept I'm too proud
Unspoken thoughts play through my head everyday
So here's to the words I cannot say
There are so many things I'll never admit
All these thoughts I'm afraid to permit
My heart stops when I see your sweet face
I fall to pieces within your warm embrace
You mean the world and everything more to me
It has become impossible for you to see
With a nervous composure, I'm a walking fraud
Afraid you'll see through to the person so flawed
I know your not perfect and neither am I
But we could be happy if you'd be willing to try
I dream a world of forever with you
I only wish I knew if you dream of me too
Your face can trap me without a single word
I think the pains of this love can be endured
I am dying for the touch of your strong hands
For us to lay together in the soft warm sand
I want to feel your breath on my tender neck
First on my cheek lay one small peck
And for you to hold me closer then before
Into my ear then let your feelings pour
Kiss my soft lips and never let me go
Don't just say you love me, let it show
Move in close so I can hear your heart beat
Let me know it's me that makes you complete
Let the rain pound down on us here below
So as we laugh and smile our love can but grow
Pick me up and whirl me around
Tell me that this is real love we've found
Bend down to the ground and stand on one knee
Ask me to marry you, I swear I'll agree
Vow to me forever through all our lives
With you I have never felt more alive
Onto my hand slip that small silver ring
As we dance our first all the words to me sing
I'll melt into you and be yours all your days
So here's to all the words I'll never say
Author notes
eh edited version.
A contest entry
- 10 options for the creative poet by bananasfoster42.
700 points, ended August 2, 2007, 30 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Once again, wow! It was almost like you read my mind and put it into your own words. But of course, it's how you feel =P I had tears in my eyes. It was mazingly beautiful, and sad at the same time!
Ps: I'm adding you to my favorites =P
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wow i'm glad that my poem meant something to you! and thank you! you're too kind
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amazing!!!!!!!!! Loved this line
As we dance our first all the words to me sing
great great job!
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o hey be sure to put the option on there please! sorry, just general rules!
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you know i like this poem! thanks for entering it!!
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oh my gosh. that made my cry.
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Sorry love. I'm glad you liked it? I think you did? Thanks for the read though!
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are you kidding i loved it!
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Aw.. I like it.. it's pretty and romantic.. A few mistakes to point out:
"dont" should be "don't"
"that to" - "to"
"your not perfect and niether" - "you're" "neither"
"dont" - Don't -
here's to the words i'll also never say.
this poem describes my situation soooo well. i guess in a way it's good to know that we're not alone in the situations we go through, that other people are going thru similar things as well.
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