Scooping out of dad’s soup
Savouring mum’s flavour
Teasing little sister
with
salt and pepper
Fruitful giggles
topped up with laughter
for dessert
Healthy eating!
In a list
A contest entry
- Let's Have Dinner! by Ted E Bare.
300 points, ended August 12, 2007, 12 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Fruitful giggles
topped up with laughter
for dessert
Healthy eating!
what a wonderful meal -
I am getting hungry!!!!! I should have eaten before I dove into reading the entries in this contest! Thanks for making me hungrier! I want to thank you for entering my "Let's Have Dinner" contest.
Ted E
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Yummy Yummy
Mina your poem has made me feel more home sick when i think of the pleasure of eating in the company of loved ones. :-( Nice poem.
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lol pleasant and cute
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charming
Oh baby! this made such a cute, charming picture- very well composed- I can almost see the scenario-'Teasing little sister with salt and pepper'-'Healthy eating!'- with family at the table and wholesome mama's food it would qualify as healthy eating indeed
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Family moments are the most precious ones, especially
meal times. A write that brought a smile. Good luck in the contest..take care.
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this was so simple but elegantly expressed. and there is some weird sad nostalgic feel i got while reading it, so good job!
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Aw this poem is too cute.
Amber -
Ah, this makes me think of dinner with my family
Lovely and made me smile
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