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Return To Innocence

I am a child
Loving and breathing,
Lost and dying
And internally screaming.

I am not ready
And never have been
To make these choices
To be made by adult not teen.

I cannot handle
These emotions wrecking my body,
These thoughts and feelings
Driving my soul out of body.

Take me please
And take away the haze.
let me return to innocence
And away from this mindnumbing maze.

Author notes

With thanks to putsabandaid on for actually posting this poem on my page for me last night when i was unable to get to a darn computer (thank the parentsfor painting the house) anywho- i 've started talking to my biological mother again for the first tiem in about 4months and so yeah -- wateva lollipops.

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  • josh-13
    July 30, 2007

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    Wow, this was a beautiful poem, You did an awesome job on writing this, You display a deep longing that is felt by who ever reads this, This is an awesome poem well worthy of an applaud.


  • Lady Australis silver member
    July 30, 2007
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    this is really good
    i hope talkin to her turns out to b good
    much love claire
    lov lost


  • PastelMoons gold member
    July 29, 2007

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    This is written very, very, well!! emotionally effective ..I am sorry you are going through
    this awful time..We've all been there hun
    Great write!!
    ~Pastel


    • Ravenblood
      July 29, 2007
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      Chank you for the comment on the poem, yes i am bored so i am replying to all of the comments ok!!! deal with it, anywho why is it that the poems you dont like very much, everyone else seems to think they're brilliant? strnage isnt it. blah blah blah got your lovely dovey sad and lonely, stick your stupid slogan and everybody sing along!!!


  • Girl With Guitar silver member
    July 29, 2007

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    You already know what I think of this, it's a beautiful poem hunni. I can relate, I think most people can at one time or another but some more than others. It's definitly one of your top writes, I truly love it. I just hope everything stays ok and doesn't get any worse. I waffle you scruffles, this poem is amazing and truly worth the three clappy dudes, it's actually worth more but we're not allowed to give any more

    Waffle ya wubs.
    Bandaid.


  • midnight-lily
    July 29, 2007

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    Aww wow its beautiful.. I know how hard it is to take the emotions of being an adult and not a teen.
    We all go through it.

    Stay strong.
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