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__Not_a_scale__

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time for ill-equipped
muscles shoe-laced to brittle bones
to try holding the world again

blistering,

cracked,

& bleeding

haunting my last decision

hard to bear the weight
before even starting
taking it on
trusting-
go


got mine down
add yours in layers
soil then ocean
not wanting to crumble
to stay strong
both worlds

back pained,

ache uncontrollable,

& hairline fractures

unwilling to admit regretting

flooding tears: adding pressure
arms wrap: willing strain

beginning to buckle,

crashing deep fast

blanking this feeling

choice obliterated

taking refuge, wing under

shoving dirt and water
back on you

Author notes

option 8.
It doesn't quiet fit into anything just right but i think it goes along with them.

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she looks so beaten down and blank

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  • shirk
    September 16, 2007

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    I'll be taking it into consideration.

    Thanks for the entry.
    Nice picture and imagery.
    Very fast paced.


  • Number 13
    July 30, 2007
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    Heh, fits me to a t.
    Gah, I love it! :]


  • Sle3p
    July 29, 2007

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    Wow, very good use of vocabulary and very discriptive. This was a very well written poem and very injoyed reading it. thank you for entering my contest!

    -maddie

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