Acoustical vibrations rolling ominous evergreen hues
swirling in muse, journey becomes adventure
leaps across time and space, imagination its center
spitting cascading ripples scribed in form
heart-warming rhythm birth ode and poem
solidifying reality and beyond
strumming heart-string like harp, emotions respond
attitude in adjustment, painted in ink
a single pen taking the world to the brink
materializing psychological cliff hangers in odes
recreating castles, dragons and other abodes
bent beams ricochet from omnipotent realms
or a pirate at sea… you take the helm
light speed journey around the world and back again
all from inside of my pen
Author notes
Author: In Too Deep
Option #1
A contest entry
- Writing, Love, Nature, or something else! (in other words, OPTIONS & points!) by Chocoholic156.
790 points, ended May 29, 2008, 16 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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So many images! This is a great write! The best of luck to you!
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So many images, so little time. Good job in relaying all of those inside this poem and keeping it very simple form and words. I love this poem. Good job and Good luck in my contest!
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very good.
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I liked it. It was really good and I think it did a wonderful job of describing poetry. It is deep and beautiful. Good job and good luck in the contesy.
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Wow, wonderful work here!
I love the contents of this piece.
Great work and good luck to you
with this one in the contest!
Jeremy0826 -
Poetry and prose in itself is sertainly a passion, one that can let out our passions for many other things, even poetry. -paint
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We as poets are only limited by our own imagination. You have shown that here. Where the muse will arise no one can truly tell or what will come from it. Thank you for entering and good luck!
Blessings
Bel
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This is a pretty cool little poem that you have here.
I think that the picture was great for setting the mood and I found myself envisioning it while I read. I like it from the first line to the last because it's filled with such poetic wording and thoughts. It really sounded pretty when I read it outloud and I enjoyed you. You did a great job.
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thats really good. i love how you express all this stuff and its all coming from just writing. everything is just so... inspirational. im proud =] and im glad i have you on my favo
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