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You passed me on the sidewalk

Although the hope is fleeting,
I've not forgotten since:
You passed me on the sidewalk
without even a glimpse.

There's no doubt to my falling,
I'm already on the ground
I've no clue what it is about you,
but I'm glad it's what I found.

Though really it's been lost
as you've carried it away
Please tell me how to find it
and please, Please don't delay.



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  • tara wilson gold member
    July 30, 2007
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    Thank you so much for your entry...I love the opening stanza