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my feelings for you are forever

Days go bye,
and still we stay the same.
Locked into each others arms,

Desperate for one more minute with each other,
hoping that nothing comes between us.
Wanting each other.

In the brightest day, with out you would be so dark.
Deep inside of my heart your there,
Wanting to stay in each others arms.

Days come and go but my feelings for you are forever.
let me take your hand and lead you away.
Hoping that this doesn't cause us to fight.

There is a greater good growing between us,
wanting to be free,
letting the world know just how it is between us.

I just want one last kiss,
before someone knows.
Will this cause us to be separated.

I want to be with you,
but they have different plans.
Days come and go, but my feelings for you are forever.

One last kiss before they take me away,
take my hand and never let me go.
Take my heart with you as you go on with your world.

Take me as away from this world,
let me be free.
Help me out of this aggravation.

In the end hopefully we'll be able to be together.
Your image haunts me in my dreams as I walk this town in search for you.
Days come and go but my feelings for you are forever.

Take my hand and lead me away,
let them fade.
Take away the pain and mistrust.

I'll be there to watch you as you succeed or fall,
to help you with your problems as you go through them.
Wanting to be with you forever.

Days come and go,
but my feeling for you are forever.
I'll be there just take my hand.

Dry your tears,
and lets just go.
Be bye my-side as we leave.

Leave this world,
follow me to the end and we shall be happy.
No more fighting around here, lets just leave and be happy.

One last kiss,
before we go.
Just hoping that nothing stops us.

Take my hand,
as we let our feeling show.
Take my memories that we both share.

Days come and go but my feelings for you are forever,
Take my hand as we walk down that long black road.
Taking everything as we go.

Don't let them know,
show them that were not kids anymore.
Show them that we can take care of ourself.

Days come and go, but my feelings for you are forever,
nothing can ever come between us.
I May have have to walk this path alone.

But before I go, just one last kiss.
Take my hand and please don't tell me no.
Take my pain, as I walk this road.

Days come and go, but my feelings for you are forever,
Take my hand and come with me.
Don't worry what they say.

There words wont hurt us.
Take our memories as I go.
Never forget the love that we share,

As I walk this path, hoping that you will be there.
Days come and go.
But my feelings for you are forever.

The nights may be lonely,
but not to worry I'll be by your-side.
I'll be there no matter what.

Day's come and go, but my feelings for you are forever.

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I think I'm on to something with this one but hopefully somone can tell me what they think

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  • Anno
    August 14, 2007

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    I think it is beautifully written, I want to know how it ends, then it end and I love the way it ends. but doesn't really. Good job.


    • ravenblade18
      August 18, 2007
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      thank you for your encuraging words, yes I know my spelling sucks today but I have a good reason, just got back from work so sorry about that lol


  • x Simply x Me x
    July 29, 2007
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    wow this is an amazing poem, great write!


    • ravenblade18
      July 29, 2007
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      thanks I wrote this one lastnight as I was listing to a song, just kind of hit me lol


  • JamesSayne
    July 29, 2007
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    I likes it

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