there's wonder in your soft allure
that sways sensuality's bedroom
escapes floating musing eyes.
frustration fidgets then frolics
penetrating hard sprawls rising
against creamed cushioned comfort
closing fast on tommorow's dream
where the endless possibilities
of dawn renders no judgments.
your shape beckons my latin ego
as I pull perception's bondage
down to desire's deliverance.
spread hot white seduction across
tender imagery while I long
to drive ecstasy's slippery road
deep in the soul of Alabama
where cappuccino boys succumb,
subject to down home southern charm.
lay me down future memories
as I caress sanctuary nestled
through your gentle silken hair.
my recluse dark ramblings
balk at your beautiful charm
as cherry vanilla exorcises
demons into temporal abyss.
my stiff darkness patiently waits
to sink in your wet salvation.
A contest entry
- Vanilla and Chocolate - a Sensual Confection by dance11.
1000 points, ended April 20, 2008, 9 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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ah, Papi...you make a woman
want to bite the sheets
delicious flavors throughout
this poem...and the last two
lines...icing. Love, lane
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Beautifully written and moving. With just a hint of sugary imagery, it leaves me longing for more. Pulls me in. Very well done. Thank you for your entry.
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a great flow here, smooth as sound on a sandwich! as i read along there was one line that i thought summed me up pretty well - my recluse dark ramblings
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Very nicely written my friend, great job on the Gold...Scott
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still breathtakingly beautiful this is such a powerfully written poem with such a raging fire and desire. love ya, Cherry
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OMG
this is absolutely freakin hot,hot,hot...I thinks me needs to go take a cool dip in the swimming pool now!This is a melter for sure...
Blessings
~Cheryl~
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yes I am very lucky to have such a hot write written for me. I keep coming back to read it is totally awesome. It just rocked my world.
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Oh and by the way.. I love the whole "latin ego" phrase.
latinos= beyond breathtaking incredibleness. -
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muchas gracias senorita
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=] de nada.
pues..de donde estás?
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*pauses*
can't think what to say.. if there's anything appropriate.
she's VERRRRRy lucky. haha yum!
you're a good writer-- even with a subject so easily botched to be distasteful, you've made so desirable and beautiful.
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You certainly fullfilled the requirements of this particular contest. One can feel the passion you exhuded quite literally, smile...(hot) very good, hope you all the best in the contest lol
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wow...wow...Maybe I need to have a contest like this...lol...damn, you did good
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An amazing and very passionate write! This was brilliantly written. Well done!
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I had to come back and read again this is just so hot and breathtaking. I love it. I mean it just lingers throughout my mind. what a beautiful passionate write
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spread hot white seduction across
tender imagery while I long
to drive ecstasy's slippery road
deep in the soul of Alabama.
gotta love them lines!
excellent lines throughout this piece;
brilliant metaphoric content... stunning imagery
makes this one a HOME RUN
This is VERY seductive... brilliantly penned. Excellent iggy
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Wow this is flat great. These words tease with enticing visions from line one all the way down.
Very good masterpiece
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i'm not gonna tell you exactly what that did for me. focking hot! there should be a law. i feel faint. greatgodalmighty!
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Holy Moly... I know your cherry vanilla loved this This was hot, hot, hot, and so romantic.
Sigh... Thank you for being my sis's muse She is very happy.
luv ya
Delila
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Oh my this is breathtakingly beautiful and so very hot and passionate. I am rather heated on this one, love, it is so amazing. such a great write. I definitely love every word of it and will have to keep it forever. thank you. Love your, Cherry Vanilla
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