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Blight

mystery bruises and stomach pains
my busy heart has scrambled brains

yellow complexion with colorless hair
I'm like an addict who just doesn't care

that her life has flip-flopped and turned
that her old life has crashed and burned

sick all around with no doctor in sight
I'm starting to think this is a cureless blight

a terminal disease encasing my soul
with a strong stab it makes a hole

emotions leak and relationships crumble
whatever happened to innocent and humble?

I'll dig my teeth into my knees and pray
God will come back for me...someday.

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  • Cup-a-Joe silver member
    August 13, 2007
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    Great

    Hey you made it rhyme.
    It's harder than some people think.
    Keep that pen of yours handy.
    Joe

  • emLeejo
    July 29, 2007

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    that was good.. but that disease that got ahold of you.. im thinking its what? love? maybe lol but yeah.. great write keep it up loverly!