I am confused
On the right hand is love
The left is lust.
My love almost two years,
My lust friends till I don't know.
But yet
One problem
Lust is different.
But yet
My love
will never differ.
My love
will never find.
That my lust
is a crush.
Author notes
Confused
by Jennifer Wooters
A contest entry
- 'Ello by Hiddenspaces.
600 points, ended August 7, 2007, 3 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Confused...isn't life and fate and love a tricky thing to understand...to discern when lust turns to love or whether love was really lust and infatuation all along from the start...scary thoughts indeed...thanks for the beautiful write.
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wonderful poem but you must put the name of the poem that inspired this.otherwise i will have to delete this beautiful peace of work from the contest.
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