When you look at me.
What do you see?
Do you see me?
Or who I pretend to be?
Can you see who I am?
Who I really am inside?
Or who I wish I was?
I wish someone could see the real me..
The pain that I feel everday..
The love I have inside for you..
The hate I feel because I do love you..
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Teck12
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awesome
sounds like song lyricks,great write! -
I totally get this great write. It is so hard to know if people see you for who you are or just who thay want you to be. Don't always try to be someone else because it will make you lose sight of who you really are and if you are always pretending to be like someone else then eventually you will forget what the real you is like because you have played someone else for soo long. thanks for the great write and good luck.
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Nice
Just returning the comment I like this! I do wonder sometimes if people see the real me...
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This is powerful..I can definately relate. Often I try to be people pleaser and lose sight of my true self and it's difficult to know what people see in me..
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