The waves race
'cross the sand.
You are gone.
Gulls cry
against the wind.
Waves fold
rush ashore.
I will move
above the tide,
build my castle
again.
Dance with dolphins.
Ride waves.
Warm my heart
by driftwood fires.
Author notes
"Erase memories and kill the pain"
A contest entry
- PIF Saturday Night Quickie 10/40/30 by poet2angels.
575 points, ended July 28, 2007, 8 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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a very inspiring piece you penned. A magical effect of hope....to erase it all,, a great job withthis one. Love the imagery and feel of this. Had to read it twice. Thaks for sharing and congrats on the bronze.
Tory
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I said this to Lynda "i have learned to accept, feel it completely let go and move on. Honor my comittments and not to treat people like possessions."
I grew up with a great deal of emotional abuse. I suffered from a High Anxiety Disorder. It has only been the last fifteen where life has been good. I guess it is reflected in my poems.
~ Tom B.
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nicely done... I like this
take on the prompt... simple, lovely... at peace
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Thank you. I went with the erase. Everyone else focused on the pain.
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Sweet,
I see ya went a different route here brother,
just thought I'd change things up a bit on my piece.purging..lol.. ;)
You have weaved a beauty here,and very inspirational at that!
Thanks for sharing,
peace, and all the best bro!
-Timothy
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Great imagery. It leaves a lingering sense of hope to the reader. Great job and best of luck!
FallenPoeticAngel
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I love the imagery; it really does dance.
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Such wonderful and beautifully poetic music coming from this piece...I really love it.......
Sigh~
Lynda
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Very Nicely Done
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"Erase memories and kill the pain"
or
the picture above
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