Threshing floor barren of worth
Every treasure gained and lost
Idle on thoughts of summer's birth
When serenity's ways appeared glossed
A recovery from those missing years
Imagined every time I behold a new dawn
Seems impossible as your ghost nears
For cupid has made my heart her tragic pawn
Your touch remains irreplaceable
These memories are simply not erasable
Author notes
insurmountable heartache
A contest entry
- 10/10/20 Come on in, Still open by Stingersinger53.
600 points, ended July 28, 2007, 5 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Awesome write!!! Filled with such sadness, an irreplaceable ache of lessons learned too soon. Beautiful, truly!
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erasable erasable erasable erasable erasable erasable erasable erasable erasable erasable erasable erasable
LOL I found a favourite word to add to my pile
Congratties on yet ANOTHER shiny
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Hrmm if I didn't have to go to work soon. I think I would write poem called erasable.
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this was awsome and a thrilling and wonderful write to read. it was deff captivatinf and it made me think. well deserved of the gold. well done
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aww sweet brother, this is so true and very eloquently written. such a wonderful job and take on prompt. very deserving of a gold.
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Great job with this one and
congratulations on winning the gold!
A truly deserving piece!
Jeremy0826 -
oh my God, you made this up just like that? Or did you cut and paste? You are briliant, jeeze- I'm going home, and givcing up writing, lol. Just kiddiing- but wow IF this is spur of the moment writing, you are a genius.
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Wonderful take on the prompt. Good luck to you in the contest!
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this is a good poem dear friend given the prompt you had
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since no one else has entered prompt is: insurmountable heartache
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