This ache inside
holds all my dreams
hopes, thoughts
and feelings,
dimming my vision,
filling my eyes
with an endless
torrent of memories,
yet
trapped by tears I'll never shed.
Author notes
wow, this is simply pathetic. I am embarrassed. Really, this is much harder than writing 'thoughtful poetry'...
A contest entry
- 10/10/20 Come on in, Still open by Stingersinger53.
600 points, ended July 28, 2007, 5 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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I liked the write. I think that you did a good job obn it. I think that write something that is out of norm from our ususal write . We sometime percieve it as being bad or different. But sometime different is good. I think you got your point across and you had feeling from the heart.goood job . and great job on winning.
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Well, I think this is much better then you think it is. You have taken the prompt and given it life. Good luck to you in the contest!
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aww tender. Goes with prompt.
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since no one else has entered prompt is: insurmountable heartache
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