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Rising River

there is a chasm
in my heart
and I stand
at
the
bottom
sight unseen
sound unheard
there is only one way to the top:
drown in a rising river of sorrow

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  • Cerulean Sunrise gold member
    July 28, 2007

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    I like.
    It's true a rising river of anything does go up.
    A great expression of sorrow. Best of Luck


  • Stingersinger53 gold member
    July 28, 2007
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    This is so sad and I love what you have taken from the prompt. Good luck to you!


  • Stingersinger53 gold member
    July 28, 2007
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    Since no one else has entered prompt is: insurmountable heartache