You snapped my heart.
Now, I'm going to break yours.
You left me with no place to call home.
Let me take something from you.
You betrayed my trust.
You lied to my face.
There's nothing you can do.
There's nothing you can say.
You've made your choice.
Now, I'm living with this heartache that is unbearable.
A contest entry
- 10/10/20 Come on in, Still open by Stingersinger53.
600 points, ended July 28, 2007, 5 entries
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Comments
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A very different take on the prompt, I like that it show another emotion within your words. Good luck to you in the contest!
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Deep. very deep. great write. i like it a lot. lots of emotion in it. great job. i know wat u mean.
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Since no more has entered Prompt is: insurmountable heartache
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