watching rain fall
on my tears..
i long for you
Author notes
come home soon
A contest entry
- PIF Quickie 10/10/20 by My Darkness.
525 points, ended July 28, 2007, 7 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Great job with the prompt and congrats on your gold.
FallenPoeticAngel
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A bit cliche for my taste, but lots of emotion in it for sure. Thanks for entering, congrats on your trophy in that contest, and good luck to you in this contest.
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A fantastic Quickie. I dont think ive found a quickie with more emotion in it that was only three lines, great job.
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thanks! i appreciate your words
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congrats
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the prompt goes well as a fourth line (although know it isn't for this piece and its restrictions) but it did sum up that emotion of longing so well in so little words. THAT is what makes it brilliant. Talent, that's all I can say, because usually you can't sum up an entire emotion in ten words.
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Well penned piece for the given prompt!
Thankls for sharing, and pen on poet!
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beautifully penned.. i have felt this agony all too much! well written poet! and good luck!
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prompt: come home soon
Please do not use the words as your title, and you are not required to use them in your poem.
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