I am more than
a pretty face
I want to have
a little space
I am more than
just athletic
I am myself
and poetic
I am more than
a smile or tear
I have thoughts
personality and fear
I am more than
a brainiac
I have feelings
that's a fact
I am more than
you can see
So look at me
without the mask please
Author notes
I'm tired of people judging me on first glance. I want people to see the real me.
A contest entry
- Do you wear a mask?? Pic inspired by Soulful Woman.
600 points, ended August 10, 2007, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - ~~~ My True Beauty ~~ by The Hardest Goodbye.
375 points, ended August 24, 2007, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Show me the real you! (options) by Dalawa.
450 points, ended October 1, 2007, 44 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Very nice. The last stanza (and especially the last line) make a great ending for the poem. Great job, and good luck!
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a very nice poem
good luck in my contest 
xo
kandy -
That is the way it should be...Thank you for entering my contest.
Soulful Woman -
A very well written poem...Nice rhyme again and u put ur statement so straightforwardly that it can not miss the mark...
ALl the best!
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Aww.. I get you. I don't like judgmental people.. I'm not one myself.
I really love your poem... reminds me a lot of myself.
Good luck with the contest.
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