Knowing you
And everything
Every single thing
About you
Is killing me
So I'll end it
Before I die
Die of you
Such a disease
Knowing you
Loving you
Breathing you
Good bye
Friends we shared
Good bye
Love we had
Every single thought
I will push away
I'm too good for you
You're better off
With my thoughts
Not coming true
Sever the tie
That's what I gotta do
Knowing you
It's killing you
It's killing me,
Killing you
But honestly-
I'm quite content
With how things went down
I'm okay
Now that you're gone
Author notes
5.
Every friend we ever had in common
I will sever the tie, sever the tie with you
You can thank your lucky stars
That everything I wish for will never come true
-Fall Out Boy, 'Sending Postcards From A Plane Crash (Wish You Were Here)'
'There's children throwing snowballs instead of throwing heads'
=) I kind of like it! It actually reminds me of Fall Out Boy, with all the repetition you know?
A contest entry
- 'Let Me Be Your %^!Swear!^% Word' [[Options]] by BenziRae.
650 points, ended September 13, 2007, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Many Options, Or Your Favorite Poem/Song You've Written by La Tua Cantante.
400 points, ended August 8, 2007, 30 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Seriously- what do you think?
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awwww shit, i think my hat just caught fire, gotta go put it out
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ur a douche- such a cool poem and you just say your hat caught fire. butthead. =D
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I like how the rhyming doesn't sound forced and doesn't always have to come in at the end of the sentence.
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i throughly enjoyed that one. very repeative but it makes it seem like you really mean what you're writing.
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I like it. The lines are short and simple but say a lot. Best of luck in the contest,
FallenPoeticAngel
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Hm. Actually it did kinda remind me of FOB. It was a pretty good view from the lyric. Very good ^-^
Good luck!
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