rejected by death-
she
waits
for him'
watching
bedsheets with stains soar through
musty air
& broken record players
rewinding only through memories
of polluted dreams.
Action_
[act 666; rolling]
Author notes
i'm sorry this is confusing..
it's the grim reaper recording
& she has to try out for death..
who ever said nobody wanted to die...
Please tell me what you think
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Great imagery. I don't think it's confusing, but creative.
FallenPoeticAngel
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act 666 very original... nice write, good luck in the contest.
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whisper
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This is great! Wonderful imagery! You should be proud!
Great job so unique!
Lynda
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This is great! Love the imagery and metaphor in this write. Great job! Thanks for entering.
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i think this is pretty good, not so much confusing, but rather creative! great take on the prompt! and good luck in the contest!
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Prompt: Picture on page
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